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I need some help on my research paper. Can someone copy and past my research paper to an answer with commas in the right places etc..Please ignore the "[]" those symbols are there for a reason. and don't mess with the quotation marks or any thing inside them. Don't mess with anything inside parenthesis either. Dallas is a fun place to visit or reside in. It is packed full of trendy neighborhoods, restaurants, theme parks, and shopping centers, plus several mass transit options. "The ultra modern and sophisticated city attracts worldwide travelers, making the area the No. 1 visitor and leisure destination in Texas"(www.visitdallas.com-City of Dallas-About the City Today 2). "Throughout the city, a visitor will enjoy the best shopping in the southwest, four-and five-diamond/star hotel's and restaurant's, the largest urban arts district in the nation, [thirteen] entertainment districts and much more"(www.visitdallas.com-City of Dallas-About the City Today 2). Dallas has a variety of people of different ethnicities and culture's. It is a very gay-friendly city with a fabulous gayborhood called Oak Lawn, nestled northwest of downtown. Dallas has a "population [of] 1,210,390 [and is] the 8th largest city in the United States [and the third] largest in Texas"(dallascityhall.com 1). It has a "land area [of] 384.7 [sq. miles]"(dallascityhall.com 1). The Dallas-Fort Worth metro is the "fourth-largest metropolitan area in the nation"(www.visitdallas.com-City of Dallas-About the City Today 2). Dallas has a "population density [of] 3,470 [residents] per sq. mile" (World Almanac and Book of Facts 1). "Located on the Trinity River, [Dallas] was first settled in 1841.[ ] While cotton fed the town's growth, the discovery in 1930 of the great East Texas oil field made the city a major [center] of the petroleum industry. It saw spectacular growth after World War II, when several large aircraft-manufacturing firms located in the area. These were followed by electronics and automobile-assembly plants. It is the headquarters of many insurance companies and the South West's leading financial [center], as well"(EncyclopediaBritannica#). "Visitors to the Dallas Metroplex have access to more than 15 airports from award winning international and national airports (DFW and Love Field) to regional and private jet facilities including Addison Airport. In addition, Dallas has constructed the world's largest urban elevated heliport in the central buisness district, which can accomidate multiple helicopters. Situated between Dallas and Fort Worth DFW [Int.] Airport is the world's third buisiest, offering nearly 1,900 flights daily with 60 million passengers annually"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Air Service 2). "Several ground transportation options are available from DFW airport, including shuttle services, automobile rentals, taxi cabs, and limousine[s]. By 2013, Dallas Area Rapid Transit (DART) will provide services to the DFW Airport"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Air Service 2). DART offers transportation via bus or light rail train throughout the vast Dallas metropolitan area. The theme parks in Dallas are amazing. There are several of them scattered throughout the DFW metro. "[Six Flags Over Texas/] Hurricane Harbor is the largest park in the South West and Six Flags Over Texas offer[s] performances and nearly 100 rides, including the world's No. 1 rated wooden roller coaster"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Attractions-Things to Do In Dallas, TX. 2). "[The] Dallas World Aquarium [ ] has its share of marine life [ ], featuring a South America rainforrest and other exibits"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Attractions-Things to Do In Dallas, TX. 2). [At the] Dallas Arboretum [you can] explore 66 acres of lush landscape, gardens, and groves that sure the whole family. [It is] situated off the shores of White Rock Lake, [with] serene scenery"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Attractions-Things to Do In Dallas, TX. 2). "[At the] Dallas Heritage Village [you can] travel back to [the] Civil War-era [of] Dallas and take a tour through 13 acres of a living history museum. Beautifuly presurved, the village potrays North Texas life from 1840-1910"(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Attractions-Things to Do In Dallas, TX. 3). "The [Dallas] Zoo gives hands-on feeding experiences with tropical birds. The zoo's nature exchange lets kids discuss their nature finds with a scientist and barter them for upgrades""(www.visitdallas.com-Dallas Attractions-Things to Do In Dallas, TX. 3). The charming city of Dallas is a fantastic setting to reside at or travel to. Travelers flock to this hub for the leisure, and entertainment produced by the 5-star restaurants, hotels, ammusement parks, neighborhoods, and shopping centers. You may travel to dallas via airplane or helico
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I have helped young people get into several colleges including Harvard Law School. You ended your first sentence with a preposition. If the rest of the paper is like the first line it will be impossible to fix it and stay within your rules. A second word of advice; you are writing to impress someone. Doing such a thing is a very bad idea. Write to express, not impress. If you do that, your writing will be better received and you will be happier with it as well.
